I love it its really deep it gives meaning to its tittle of how the truth is behind the tears how every last bit of happines is lost by the lies. how aswell i couldnt notice that i was loosing it.
I was loosing it because the pain was blinding me of what was really happening. And somhow the hope helped get up but only to drag me back to pain. I dont know if im making myself clear but this is how i feel this poetry
Im not really good at critiquing poetry or writting at all I´m fan of reading though but not that good at critique it.
This is amazing i would never change it. I actually was feeling really down and this somehow gave a meaning to all that sadness that was filling up my soul.
Well this is my critique hope sounds fair im not northamerican so there might be some mistakes sorry about that. Keep up this poetry thing ts really good.